# Here is a game I made as a school project if you want to have a look (constructive criticism encouraged)

**URL:** <https://forum.makecode.com/t/here-is-a-game-i-made-as-a-school-project-if-you-want-to-have-a-look-constructive-criticism-encouraged/29569>\
**Category:** Show & Tell\
**Tags:** game\
**Created:** [July 5, 2024, 4:01am UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/here-is-a-game-i-made-as-a-school-project-if-you-want-to-have-a-look-constructive-criticism-encouraged/29569 "2024-07-05T04:01:12Z")\
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**Author:** ![Lukiechu](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/lukiechu/32/17352_2.png) [@Lukiechu](https://forum.makecode.com/u/Lukiechu)\
**Post date:** [July 5, 2024, 4:01am UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/here-is-a-game-i-made-as-a-school-project-if-you-want-to-have-a-look-constructive-criticism-encouraged/29569/1 "2024-07-05T04:01:12Z")

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link to simulator below please comment any bugs you find in the game  
it’s a platformer parkour type game based on the maori tradition to celebrate the new year with a star cluster called matariki

> **[Matariki game YAY (PULIC VERSION)](https://arcade.makecode.com/S33806-84982-81813-82270)**
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> Made with ❤️ in Microsoft MakeCode Arcade.

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**Author:** ![awdrgyjil](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/awdrgyjil/32/20926_2.png) [@awdrgyjil](https://forum.makecode.com/u/awdrgyjil)\
**Post date:** [July 5, 2024, 4:22pm UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/here-is-a-game-i-made-as-a-school-project-if-you-want-to-have-a-look-constructive-criticism-encouraged/29569/2 "2024-07-05T16:22:31Z")

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Nice good job

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**Author:** ![randomuser](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/randomuser/32/36648_2.png) [@randomuser](https://forum.makecode.com/u/randomuser)\
**Post date:** [July 5, 2024, 4:23pm UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/here-is-a-game-i-made-as-a-school-project-if-you-want-to-have-a-look-constructive-criticism-encouraged/29569/3 "2024-07-05T16:23:47Z")

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Welcome! This is great! The custom artwork is pretty cool, you could also make a custom player sprite to match. I think the black background is a little spooky, maybe you could make it light blue or dark blue with stars? The levels are perfectly challenging and entertaining!

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**Author:** ![Lukiechu](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/lukiechu/32/17352_2.png) [@Lukiechu](https://forum.makecode.com/u/Lukiechu)\
**Post date:** [July 6, 2024, 5:01am UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/here-is-a-game-i-made-as-a-school-project-if-you-want-to-have-a-look-constructive-criticism-encouraged/29569/4 "2024-07-06T05:01:52Z")

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thanks for the ideas I will probably release another or update this post with a new version of the game soon so stay tuned

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**Author:** ![Lukiechu](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/lukiechu/32/17352_2.png) [@Lukiechu](https://forum.makecode.com/u/Lukiechu)\
**Post date:** [July 6, 2024, 5:05am UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/here-is-a-game-i-made-as-a-school-project-if-you-want-to-have-a-look-constructive-criticism-encouraged/29569/5 "2024-07-06T05:05:20Z")

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I have updated the game just added some ideas people have had about the game (again please give constructive criticism and voice any ideas gripes or bugs with the game and I will try to reply and apply all ideas I find relevant.)  
Thanks and goodbye