# PLEASE more criticism for this game **URL:** \ **Category:** Forum Feedback\ **Tags:** game, graphics-and-math, art, music, platformer\ **Created:** [July 14, 2023, 3:50pm UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211 "2023-07-14T15:50:56Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 9\ **Page:** 2
**Author:** ![jackal](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/jackal/32/19506_2.png) [@jackal](https://forum.makecode.com/u/jackal)\ **Post date:** [August 2, 2023, 4:23pm UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211/23 "2023-08-02T16:23:42Z")
NOW THAT, looks like a game with good potential. ---
**Author:** ![BlastBoxGames](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/blastboxgames/32/11727_2.png) [@BlastBoxGames](https://forum.makecode.com/u/BlastBoxGames)\ **Post date:** [August 2, 2023, 9:02pm UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211/24 "2023-08-02T21:02:18Z")
am I Some Box Guy? ---
**Author:** ![goldtopaz](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/goldtopaz/32/28622_2.png) [@goldtopaz](https://forum.makecode.com/u/goldtopaz)\ **Post date:** [August 5, 2023, 2:45am UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211/25 "2023-08-05T02:45:11Z")
Ok gamer horde let me explain whats in the game alright, you see there are about 4 power ups in the game and multiple pathways, with secrets wich some times require some sort of platforming or puzzle challenge to beat which of course leads to sweet rewards like a 1up, 2up, rainbow grahnigr which is 50 gem points, and a double jump add with sick visuals and intresting level design this will be a makecode clasic ---
**Author:** ![goldtopaz](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/goldtopaz/32/28622_2.png) [@goldtopaz](https://forum.makecode.com/u/goldtopaz)\ **Post date:** [August 31, 2023, 4:28pm UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211/26 "2023-08-31T16:28:30Z")
![arcade-gangster-hyper (1)](https://us1.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/uploads/makecode/original/2X/4/446c90c3e386bb99005f605e26216f9e03059301.png) here another little update to my game for all people wondering if this game was still in the land of the living! so here this new thing you can put in play and of course critique so that’s cool! ---
**Author:** ![\_jupiter](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/_jupiter/32/28012_2.png) [@\_jupiter](https://forum.makecode.com/u/_jupiter)\ **Post date:** [September 5, 2023, 5:41pm UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211/27 "2023-09-05T17:41:23Z")
![image](https://us1.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/uploads/makecode/original/2X/b/b16fd2f0e5a836ba253e21cc11cfe737fc444395.png) what ---
**Author:** ![goldtopaz](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/goldtopaz/32/28622_2.png) [@goldtopaz](https://forum.makecode.com/u/goldtopaz)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2023, 9:35pm UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211/28 "2023-09-13T21:35:06Z")
the context to the title was so I can tell the diffrent versions I made for the game ---
**Author:** ![goldtopaz](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/goldtopaz/32/28622_2.png) [@goldtopaz](https://forum.makecode.com/u/goldtopaz)\ **Post date:** [September 13, 2023, 9:35pm UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211/29 "2023-09-13T21:35:11Z")
Here’s a much more accessible version of the game so you can play so I want to know what you guys think about it. [https://goldtopaz.github.io/gangster-hyper-the-dragon-alr/](https://goldtopaz.github.io/gangster-hyper-the-dragon-alr/) ---
**Author:** ![NateBlake](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/n/c77e96/32.png) [@NateBlake](https://forum.makecode.com/u/NateBlake)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2024, 2:05am UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211/30 "2024-10-31T02:05:54Z")
Graphics issue should be improved so that players can see more easily ---
**Author:** ![goldtopaz](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex020/user_avatar/forum.makecode.com/goldtopaz/32/28622_2.png) [@goldtopaz](https://forum.makecode.com/u/goldtopaz)\ **Post date:** [October 31, 2024, 2:10am UTC](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211/31 "2024-10-31T02:10:14Z")
This is a old version of the game from 1 year ago if you want a better version just got [Hyper the dragon the kinda final release before the actual release](https://forum.makecode.com/t/hyper-the-dragon-the-kinda-final-release-before-the-actual-release/30401) [Previous page](https://forum.makecode.com/t/please-more-criticism-for-this-game/21211.md?page=1)